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Oceans moves in waves each single heartbeat grasping claws of steel holding Trance like beautiful your every wish come true wings of a spirit spread Flying majestic beauty one golden eagle power draws inside Flying high one soul from an imagination a gravity pull Sweetly emotions singing illusions, one dream reality kicks In the arrow strikes what a fantasy dream sits feeling floating rose Essence butterflies fluttering blossoms sweetly Explosion hotly A soul it sang in one heart that gave wings sharing a meal delight you You sipped wine with grace an amazing smile I could feel the blood rushing If I lost you love a lone wolf will forever howl to her face sad Tears sweet surrender never ending searching space full of love howling Felt like kneeling at your feet adoring beauty you will always be Oath of forever love that very night to you smiling beautiful You lit up such love flames on fire with your grasping talons hot Took hold of me deep your smile was amazing cute drawing one starlight Eternity calls the power of destiny one in a thousand You lit up such love flames on fire with your grasping talons hot Wishes trance like hold beautiful in every wish granted came true love Silver shadows in the deep ocean treasure gem dancing ripples leap Liquid silver paint shimmering moon reflections mirror distant thoughts Golden the pathway walking across rippling in body, one deep love Feelings begin to hold in, emotions sings out we join together Passionately we kiss with all inside my heart I love you sweet babe This I co wrote with an amazing beauty on site twenty one the key to the heart's door

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Date: 9/13/2014 4:24:00 PM
On the whole, this set of haiku is rich and expressive. Much enjoyed. I too agree with what Andrea said....haiku tends to tie you down when the material you are dealing with offers such wide possibilities. // paul
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:27:00 AM
Excellent. Outstanding work. Enjoyed . Tfs
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:25:00 AM
It is an extremely lovely feeling when you write with someone,, and here I love the intricate lines, they are rich with suggestive beauty.. Nice work, Liam! Liam is it, hope I got it right!
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:59:00 PM
This is really pretty. So nice to jive well with a co-writer!! I wonder why you two just don't free verse it!! Free yourself of haiku's limiting syllable count. I think you could soar!!
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Date: 9/12/2014 5:19:00 PM
Delightful romantic write Liam!
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Date: 9/12/2014 4:39:00 PM
Wow these are gorgeous!
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:19:00 PM
- Woow .... Liam ......... they are soooo beautiful all of them!!!!! - (And I'm struggling to write 3 lines .... :) - So talented you are !!!! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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