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Our First Unification

This morning I awoke in this wonderful place I turned and viewed, the most beautiful of face She was lying beside me naked as birth Blond haired and tanned, being the first was worth She opened her eyes and prompted me to say "My darling Eve you look beautiful today, Your fruitful body all pinky and peached, Our first unification is about to be seeked" I stood, she arose as we headed to the stream We blessed each other in this land of dreams Washing and caressing under a sky so blue Holding her to my heart this feeling of true I look into her eyes as I pull my Eve to me "Take my hand and I shall lead you to the tree. Upon the ground we'll lay and reach within our souls For on this very day, we shall rejoice in our eternal extol" As we lay on the grass, with the roots of life all around Plants and animals of different species resonate our surrounds The sky becomes even bluer, whilst the sun rains down on us Today's the day when woman and man express their loving discuss Below the tree I say "Our moment will be so special, our fruits will bear us son's. For we are the worlds tomorrow, it's future has just begun" We lie wrapped in each other, consummating first love To the skies we look we know he's there looking down at us from above To my Eve, Simone Segal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 5:18:00 PM
Congrats for the fifth place win
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:41:00 PM
Congrats James on your fifth place win in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/25/2010 9:02:00 PM
A very interesting take on the story, James :) Wishing you all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:58:00 PM
Great story, James, very different from the real Garden story. haha. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:09:00 PM
Wish you all the best in the contest. I enjoyed the last quatrain the most
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Date: 5/21/2010 4:35:00 PM
WOW !!!! This is just fantastic Mr. Fraser ! I didn't enter this contest, yet, if I did, I'd be way at the bottoms wit this one ! Great write Sir ! james
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Date: 5/21/2010 2:32:00 PM
This is really very good. I especially liked the fourth quatrain. good luck in the contest . Charles
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