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Our First Kiss

Striking lightening these hands were shaking trembling underneath you're touch electrifying so eager to please you my love this love forever pines away each drifting view inside a desert oasis with you An angel's voice sweetly sings out chants magic every word so sweet my unforgettable dream Inside this you are darling shining brightest of all stars liquid silver shivering inside the moon begins to weep sweet starlight crystals winking droplets fall love you are each and every one A beautiful memory lasts forever touching so deeply reality dreaming soft treasure always waving lips of desire that I will never forget as long as I should ever live, the very first kiss joining lips breathtaking with you my love complete

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/3/2014 11:10:00 AM
Liam...this is so beautiful. I love how you address your beloved...Love! So pretty and perfect. I love how you love nature and bring it all into play with your writes. Kisses...it doesn't get better than that!
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Date: 9/2/2014 5:27:00 PM
That kiss...Isn't it beautiful?And yes a memory can last forever-Romantic!!Charma
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Date: 8/31/2014 3:43:00 PM
oh yes, that first GOOD kiss, it lasts forever in the memory. You made it come alive with shimmering imagery.
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Date: 8/31/2014 1:06:00 PM
eautiful imagery in this tender romantic write Liam:-) hugs Jan xx
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