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Our Excursion Is a Pathway

Our excursion is a pathway we must follow in the journey of life beyond this universe. Love is that eternal emotion we all seek. Poetry is the sweet music—light or dark, that is bound from the union of our hearts. Without poetry our minds are a whirlpool. Disoriented and lost without song and sense there is a unique understanding with delight that moves us toward the direction of words. Believing in our mortal life existing on Earth: A true proclamation of faith holding strong with a power and purpose beyond our grasp. Eternity embraces our eternal existence and in every daily aspect of our lives and our souls, light holds the final godly power over darkness. Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (May 25, 2015) (Unrhymed Tercet)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/29/2015 1:51:00 PM

- A poem that speaks with great words in both sweet music and godly power - A wonderful poem from you my friends Liam & Gary ! - I apologize for my "late" visit .... but better late than never :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - (Hope all is well with you) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/26/2015 10:33:00 AM

Liam Mate!! This one looks fantastic in PoetrySoup posted print!! I really like how this collaboration turned out with the Tercet format. I'm very sure many of our fellow poet colleagues with enjoy this write and its particular message ending with: "light holds the final godly power over darkness." Great working with you on this Liam. Cheers, Mate!! Gary

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2015 6:58:00 PM

enjoyed this collaboration, a pleasure to have read:) .. *always, S.K.A.T.*

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/25/2015 2:11:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Gary! My dearest friend Liam this is another excellent poem collaboration between you and our dear friend Gary.A very beautifully written piece.smiling.Just dazzling!Great collaboration!Just awesome!I enjoyed it.A 7 +++ to each!Your pens are truly mighty golden!You're always in my prayers for healing and all Liam.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxoxD.^O^

Tim Smith

Date: 5/25/2015 12:45:00 PM

Excellent collab guys....I don't know where I'd be without poetry

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/25/2015 10:51:00 AM

I like this, gentlemen. Not only because it showcases the beauty of your verses, it also gives proof to the positive effect a good friendship has on your muses. Very good collaboration, Liam and Gary. A 7.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/25/2015 10:51:00 AM

Another great collaboration, I really loved this poem and especially the line " Poetry is the sweet music—light or dark," That line resonates so well with me, great poem!!!!