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"Our Connection"

Some days pour like water from a teapot...
Other days like thick syrup from a spoon...
When you miss someone so much you can't stop...
Those feelings in your stomach bounce to a sad tune...
Your eyelashes batting to a sound I have to write too...
No time for missing a step or a shortcut to this stage...
To play in sync we must share our thoughts for what to do...
Your not as close as I would like, but our connection can't be caged...
You know I miss you now more then my usual way, without you in
my arms these words are my only say...
I will write you a song to be my start, follow the notes and drift
back to my heart...

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  1. Date: 7/10/2010 3:14:00 AM
    wow, "I will write you a song to be my start, follow the notes and drift back to my heart..." that absolutely does it for me.. Once again I am in awe Michael.. Fav it is :) Wilma

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 10:04:00 PM
    well done!! enjoyed reading it sounds like a love note to me.

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 4:22:00 PM
    Romantic Connection from the White Knight... such wonderful words I look so forward to reading u Michael... waiting to take off now .. a matter of an hour or so... should be home Saturday some time.. hope u will enter my new Haiku contest.. make it romantic ...OK.. with luv..

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 3:50:00 PM
    Michael you trully have a way with words, enjoyed every line. My favorite was the EYELASHES BATTING SOUNDS I HAVE TO WRITE ABOUT. very impressive, sooner or later it all falls back together. Loved and enjoyed your poem,..LeeAnn

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 3:22:00 PM
    Michael, you grace our eyes with another Gem. Their is a magical warmth in your poetry, I must sit down and peruse your portfolio with a Oakey Chardonnay, now that's a sitting worth sitting for. Thank you for your kind comments on Six Sixty Six, I have no worries about writing about anything >> James

  1. Date: 7/9/2010 3:03:00 PM
    Such moving words, Michael. Indeed a "connection can't be caged," but I hope you keep your heart open and the right person finds their way inside. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn