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I look around today and what do I see Tall beautiful people that form a commnity I see wanna be singers with cooks and doctors too and even when you're lonely i'll always see you We are the true face of beauty we've got the mad swagger we shoot like a pro and it really does matter So take a hand in yours and hold on real tight because what I see right now is such a beautiful sight

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Date: 5/7/2016 11:23:00 PM
Thank you everyone and I will be posting more poems in the following weeks so please feel free to give me constructive critism or advice for a young poet.
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Date: 5/5/2016 11:55:00 PM
LEXIS, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:21:00 AM
Lexis, are you going to post a bit more??? Here you have a beautiful poem. Revealing the beauty before... I would like to hear from you, about constructive criticism on another poem...LINDA
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Date: 4/4/2016 10:19:00 AM
Anyone please give me some constructive critism because I am new to writing poetry and I am trying to get better so I can impress my dad and make him proud.Also I am the poet laureate for Eiland Middle School so I have to keep up the good image so please give me any advice you think I may need.Thanks!!!
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Date: 4/3/2016 3:22:00 AM
Lexis, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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