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Our hearts have chambers, four in all; like caves, they are defined and seen. But there are hidden caves within where our emotions live between. The Cave of Love, the largest one, is filled, but sometimes shuts its door. Much better to keep it ajar so give and take can flow, restore. And next to it, the Cave of Faith; it feeds our hearts with gifts of trust in God, our Earth and those we love; and also in ourselves, a must. Along with Faith, the Cave of Hope puts sunshine in our hearts so bright, that lifts us up no matter what, through sunny days or dark of night. The Cave of Service in our heart is filled with help to fellowman; must keep its contents flowing out... a part of our survival plan. At last, the Cave of Thankfulness provides an echo loud and strong. Our hearts get fuller with the joy when gratefulness sings its sweet song. Heart chambers hold the beat and flow that keep our bodies so alive. But unseen caves where "heartfelt" lives, our magic inner selves survive. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Premiere Contest: 2019 Marathon Mile 16 Sponsor: Mark Toney Judged: 02/05/2019 ~1st Place~ Premiere Contest: Caves Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Judged: 08/07/2016

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Date: 2/7/2019 12:23:00 AM
Bravo, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2019 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/6/2019 4:29:00 PM
What a brilliant simile! wow, wow, wow! I don't think the notion of 'the human heart' has ever, in the non-medical sense, been delineated so well--congrats on your win, Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2019 7:53:00 PM
Thank you very much for your visit, L.J. and for your congrats and very uplifting comments! They are very much appreciated. Sandra :)
Date: 2/6/2019 3:36:00 PM
Sandra, this is a very clever and creative write! A Fav for me. Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 16 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2019 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mark! I am very pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate the Fav in addition to my nice placement! On to the next mile! Sandra :)
Date: 2/6/2019 3:26:00 PM
Wow, I love exploring these "caves" with you, Sandra. Your heart is filled with compassion, faith and love. A stunning write! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs, carolyn
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2019 7:52:00 PM
Thank you, Carolyn, for your lovely, uplifting comments and congrats. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 2/6/2019 3:11:00 PM
Many congratulations,Sandra, Such a meaningful, well expressed poem. Congratulations on your continued success in the marathon!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/7/2019 7:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy! I appreciate your visit, congrats, and lovely comments. It is so nice to see you on these marathon winner's lists too, and best wishes for the rest! Hugs, Sandra :)
Date: 8/12/2016 11:29:00 PM
Congrats on your high place win. Love Sunita :)
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Date: 8/12/2016 9:05:00 AM
Very well worded, struck an instant chord within! Huge Congrats! Sushma A. Singh
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Date: 8/9/2016 2:23:00 PM
Really nice, congratulations!
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Date: 8/9/2016 5:22:00 AM
Hi Sandra, Your pen is outstanding. I really enjoyed your take on the theme. Who would have thought one could write such a piece and subject is about caves?Your talent shines in this write. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. A Big seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/9/2016 4:33:00 AM
This is a beautiful take on four caves . Congratulations.
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Date: 8/8/2016 9:11:00 PM
Sandra...this is AWESOME! Congratulations on your very deserved first place. You are on a magical carpet ride...soaring into the stratosphere! A 7 and fave from me! ; )
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Date: 8/8/2016 10:51:00 AM
An uplifting win Sandra, congratulations...
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Date: 8/8/2016 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on the well deserved win.
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Date: 8/8/2016 8:53:00 AM
What a wonderful use of the word cave, usually we think of dark and damp, but you turned it into a positive, very inventive, and was rewarded with a well deserved first place win congrats.
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Date: 8/8/2016 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st., Sandra, with this imaginative and thoughtful poem. Barry.
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Date: 8/7/2016 3:48:00 PM
Love the caves allegory to chambers of our lives, Sandra. How creative and congrats on your top win:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:53:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura, for your visit and supportive comments and congrats! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/7/2016 2:52:00 PM
This is very beautiful Sandra. Definitely well deserving of a trophy and 2 thumbs up from Houston.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Phillip. I appreciate your visit and uplifting comments! Sandra
Date: 8/7/2016 1:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win. A heart warming write about the human heart. It brings one to tears, words like "unseen caves" and "gifts of trust" make this poem so beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, for your nice visit and lovely comments. I appreciate your support so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/7/2016 12:44:00 PM
Great well-done congrats 1st xxxx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy, for your support! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/7/2016 10:45:00 AM
Sandra, just beautiful..congrats on your top premier contest win lady! :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laura. I appreciate your nice comments and support always. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/4/2016 8:52:00 AM
This is beautiful Sandra...love it....7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/7/2016 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph! Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 10:51:00 AM
Lovely thoughts put into words, Mrs Sandra Hope you are feeling well and getting some exercise.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 10:57:00 AM
Thank you for the uplifting comment, Daniel. Actually, I am not feeling bad at all and that is puzzling to me. I'm pretty active (except for the hours here on my computer with PS). I stretched my use and liking for cake a bit to meet the contest theme...mostly I eat pretty good. So, sometimes the body does it's thing anyway I suppose. Thank you for your concern. Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 9:09:00 AM
How beautiful like a river:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 10:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Madhupriya. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 8:27:00 AM
Penned beauty with lovely truth reflections is sure to be a winner ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 10:58:00 AM
You are so kind, CayCay. Thank you for your uplifting support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 8/3/2016 4:47:00 AM
Great caves indeed ... Great write ...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/3/2016 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, Probir. I appreciate your positive comment. Sandra

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