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"our Castle In the Rain"

The forecast calls for rain tonight... We can hide away and make it right... A staircase to places where we can spend some time... Read you words that shelter your desire like fine aged wine... We can jingle jangle like two keys on a chain... Rubbing together while making sparks that light even in the rain... Our hearts beating to the sound of water dancing on the rooftop... All things in place, a night we can't stop... Our castle is made, the bridge is washed out... We hold each other close and just echo's of passion that shouts...

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/16/2010 12:36:00 AM

That castle sure sounds like it is magical--thanks for giving us a sneak peek of what could go in there-- you sure got romantic in your name, Michael ;)-- nikko :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/14/2010 1:08:00 PM

Awesome title Michael, followed by a super poem. I just love it, it oozes sheer love and warmth. You have that in abundance >> James

Thvia Shetley

Date: 11/14/2010 5:25:00 AM

Very nice, I appreciate so much the sentiments in this.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/13/2010 3:34:00 AM

Very sweet,friend.'We can jingle,jingle like two keys.....'I enjoyed it very well

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/13/2010 1:25:00 AM

Awesome romantic write Mr. F really enjoyed having a look inside your castle... Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/12/2010 6:52:00 PM

Well that Castle sounds like a lovely place indeed and how perfect that the White Knight should pen this rare beauty ..u had me at rubbing together while making sparks.. must show Ron that line..luv.. and the passion in this piece is awesome as always ... the Jersey Girl is on fire.. and Ron won't be here till the midnight hour..luv..