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Ourn Breath

. Snap Crackle Pop Like the Fourth of July In this crisp cold his little mine smile ourn breath met

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Date: 12/1/2011 10:43:00 AM

Sounds like the two of you are having fun either in the leaves or snow. Nice to share those moments and thanks for sharing with us. love phyl

Date: 11/29/2011 6:43:00 PM

I wonder if their breaths ended in a kiss. You leave me wondering James, such a nice thing to do! :)

Date: 11/28/2011 8:08:00 PM

James... lol... i love all the sparks here... ..Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

Date: 11/28/2011 2:42:00 PM

Sounds like a leaf pile to me, eh? Very seasonal, with life forces. Enjoyed especially. Love, daver

Date: 11/27/2011 8:58:00 PM

Indeed, let's not forget. enjoyed this fun piece alot. Wishing you a great week James ~.~

Date: 11/27/2011 3:59:00 PM

this is sure a fun read, James. I almost confused you with another james I know today!! Glad to see this recent posting of yours up!

Date: 11/27/2011 7:41:00 AM

Interesting read...enjoyed .

Date: 11/27/2011 7:07:00 AM

Very nice image my friend... very nice.. Michael