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SUCH A SIGJHT I SAW, The rippling of the waves lapping over the golden shore , The billowing ocean shimmering in the darting starlight, It makes me feel relaxed as if everything else in life has wandered away, SUCH A SIGHT I SAW. SUCH A SMELL I SMELT, As the sea salt rumbled into foam As it blew up the beach, And into the distance, SUCH A SMELL I SMELT. SUCH A TASTE I TASTED, The cooling ice cream trickling gently down my throat, It refreshes me from the tips of my toes, SUCH A TASTE I TASTED. SUCH A SOFT TOUCH I FELT, Water sprinkling over the plam of my hand, I was so relaxed and calm, such a soft touch i felt.

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Date: 1/25/2016 7:41:00 PM
DANIELLE, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/1/2009 12:17:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Danielle. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/30/2009 10:13:00 AM
Terrific write of the senses Danielle>>James
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