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Our Family Valley

OUR FAMILY VALLEY Mountains strong withstand the turmoil, Protect our valley from the storm. The river makes a fertile soil And seedling trees can start to form. The slopes are crowded with the trees And their pine scent fills our valley’s breeze. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . NOTE: Moraine Lake in Banff National Park always reminded me of a family of father, mother, and children. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for John Freeman’s Contest “A Nature Verse” ( syllables 8 8 8 8 8 9 )

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Date: 9/21/2011 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Moses "A Nature Verse" Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, Sydney
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:30:00 AM
syd... you're way ahead with this gracious piece but i'm ahead.. lol, j/kidding.. ..cheers and more cheers to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:33:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Syn. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:06:00 PM
Sidney, The beauty of Moraine Lake for sure, thanks for taking the time to offer your memorable verse, the honor was mine in reading this worthy second place entry. Agape, Moses.
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish Sydney. Well done
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:55:00 AM
Well written Sydney. Tony
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