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WE ARE OUR EMPTINESS WE ARE OUR SONG WE WITH DISCIPLINE WON'T FALL DOWN WE'LL STAY STRONG, WHEN IN THE SOURCE WE REST. *

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 11:08:00 PM

Once again thank you for the old reply on my comment...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 11:07:00 PM

Iris, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 4:34:00 PM

Dear Iris, I hope you are trying to get published girl, because you got major talent lady, this is another powerful work of poetic honesty, love your last sentence bang on the power button, let it's explosion be heard around the world, and it's tremendous wake felt beyond in universal space, we are the strong within the embrace of the source, cheri

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 2/9/2015 8:15:00 PM

Cheri, you're one of the best of my mentor of sorts, and I so thank you for that. Priceless feedback, my friend to the end. namaste! and God bless.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2014 10:35:00 PM

So thoughtful Iris,, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~

David Meade

Date: 12/24/2014 9:20:00 PM

Only when we are empty can we take in all the love . . . sing and dance. Light and love. 7

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2014 7:56:00 PM

Iris,, Stopping by to say Hello, and Wish you a very Merry, Merry Christmas!!! May it bring you joy, happiness and everything else you deserve. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year! Forever ~LINDA~

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 12/24/2014 8:08:00 PM

Linda, my mother's namesake, So kind of you, my dear. blessings galore in the new year and beyond namaste!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 12/24/2014 8:02:00 PM

Thank you my dear, Pandita You're very kind. I'll certainly return to your wonderful collection merry happy everything...

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/24/2014 8:29:00 AM

Excellent piece with a powerful message! Well done, Iris! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Pandita.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 12/24/2014 8:06:00 PM

You're very kind. i must return again to your wonderful collection merry happy everything now and beyond.***

Abraham Elizondo

Date: 12/23/2014 2:04:00 PM

we love this poem!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 4/6/2015 11:42:00 PM

Thank you Abraham, right back to you.