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Ouchies

my neck hurts often somewhere in the complexity of my moving parts is the problem unidentified I am likely the cause of this crunching pain I close my eyes to wish it away sometimes I find it occasionally responsive to manipulation something snakes unravels and just an echo remains where I was hurting like cotton wool walls to dampen my thinking
the path to my brain meanders a little too much denies me comfort

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Date: 4/13/2024 11:01:00 PM
If you can weather it through without medication, it is probably best. I liked how you implicated the fickle nerves in the brain.
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Date: 4/13/2024 11:10:00 PM
Thanks Hilda, I'm on day 3 now and weather everything without medication as I'm not a fan. However, I think I'll scope out a paracetamol today and see if I can take the edge off. Thanks for your comment x

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