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Ouch Low Battery

Low battery In the wee hours of the morn She was torn between two pillows; Pure ecstasy escalates; A blinking Indicator become A disruptive behavior: suddenly A dishonorable discharge ouch! sorry low battery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/2/2012 3:07:00 PM
enjoyed this clever poem, different.
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Date: 8/29/2012 6:24:00 PM
nice poem...lol...funny!! Hugs - Laila
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Date: 8/29/2012 11:44:00 AM
Like your humor in this little verse Annie. Come and read my "Three heads" it's also fun. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2012 11:16:00 AM
Hmmm... funny to read... but maybe disappointing at the time... ;-) Terry (nice poem)
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Annie Lander
Date: 8/29/2012 11:31:00 AM
just a little humour Terry O/Leary..Irish name one love annie

Book: Shattered Sighs