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Other-Worldly

An early morning run across a misty lake comes in, fades out of view with every stroke I take. With pace that ebbs and flows from tunes within my head, I hope the rhythmic rowing will not wake the dead. I try to focus on the things that Austin taught, but mostly, in the moment, I’m enraptured, caught up in this misty morning ‘cross unknown expanse; time and distance slip away in other-wordly trance…

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Date: 3/2/2023 7:23:00 PM
I'm not well-read enough to know the references you've made -- like 'Austin?' -- but something pulls me toward the feeling you've created out there early morning on that lake. The mist and mystery of it all, I guess.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/3/2023 3:01:00 AM
Sorry, no great literary reference, Austin is a YouTube figure in the world of rowing - he does TrainingTall videos - he's a very likable instructor, 6'8", 28, and the pleasant version of Jim Carey, humor-wise. A lot of people in the rowing community have been helped by his training videos.

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