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Osmosis

Autopilot tired broken wings sore in soaring flight fluttering, down-spiral clouds streaming beyond fog drowsy then, three barrel rolls swirling through silver light simulcast storm shakes black topsoil mineral enriched, vitamins collide, seep through porous skin providing synthesized eruptions cataclysmic spasms drop knowledge undetected by erudition Thick walls wobble, crack, then begin to close in on the thin skull a metaphysical transformation manifests three! three! threes permeate preserving Oblivion... Earth, moon, stars proton, neutron, electron, mother, father, child Fertile land dissolves for the horizon turquoise soaks toes and so an enigmatic awakening idle imagination swiftly shifts gears here from stationary stone to being thrown through the moon effervescent agitation bubbling oceans strewn triggering intensity tridimensional trepidation sleet sheets pelt clipper ships Parochial, no longer the vision mood scoots through sinister to happy-go-lucky three grim blankets lift from melodramatic souls This mighty universe revolves aflame with AGAPE... (*sappy to sophisticated) The final oscillation ©2014 ~JSL PoetTreez Publishing

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Date: 6/14/2014 11:56:00 AM
I admit upon seeing your title- I was expecting something different, but was pleasantly brought along for this unexpected & dynamic ride-- what a layered journey, do keep on writing your wonderful poetry! Very nice sprinkling of alliteration here, too! Really enjoyed reading this and happy to see you here!
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Date: 6/14/2014 11:51:00 AM
Domo arigato, Joey!! Looky looky who is back!! That pen name of yours has stuck with me, but ah, me liking the "esoteric" part of your name now--- I have been meaning to ask where you were--stumbled upon your name when I was looking at some of my old writes-- and then I see your avatar on the home page! Your poems are always such a pleasure to read-- food for thought and me loving your wordplay (you do it so well!) and the so many layers of meaning that one can deduce from this-- cont'd
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:40:00 PM
gosh it is very SCI FI sounding but also metaphysical. I think it is a spiritually symbolic one as well. (hope I did not get that wrong) I see you have a fan using your avatar with you. Awesome!!
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Date: 6/13/2014 10:38:00 PM
10 thousand new poems, huh?? So where the heck are they/ hahaha. Let me read this one now!!!
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