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Oslo Sonnet

Oslo Sonnet Today I made a vegetarian meal it was not any good, but we ate it, after all, it was healthy and I remembered the time when I had the idea of becoming a vegetarian cook or chef as it is called now got an interview in Oslo and took the night train. Third class and the open carriage was full; luckily I had a blanket with me I used it as the tent so I didn`t have to talk to anyone. It was a seven-hour journey it was so boring I was ready to get up a scream but somehow fell into a trance. We arrived at eight the station café was open I had a coffee and fell asleep. A man in uniform woke me and told me to leave this was not rest- room for vagabonds. Oslo was entirely grey, building, people, the road it was as colours had fled to a tropical paradise and cold coconut milk first thing in the morning By now I had lost all interest in the vegetarian thing and ate eggs and plenty of bacon took the train home but in a first class compartment. At home, there was a cable for me a job on a ship a week later I was in Jamaica where the colours in Oslo also had gone. I met a girl we danced to the music from jukebox something about a blanket on the ground and the night in Jamaica was blue silk, the moon was full and golden.

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Date: 7/4/2016 6:19:00 AM
Jan, A most interesting story for sure. I like the way you rendered your sonnet write in more of a narrative-oriented format. A quite interesting variation, but very effective. Excellent Work!! A "SEVEN" too!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 7/5/2016 6:28:00 AM
thank you, Gary Bateman

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