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Orphanne'

“A crippled, crawling,curious girl, stumbled into light; her fractured, hopeless, dreary world, is given second sight.. Her heart,hardened, and doubled, broken, now, into. her manic thoughts, so troubled, daily,now, renewed. An memories,mirror, an attack, by tragic,childish fears; the smile you see is now unmatched, caressed by happy tears. The enemy of stolen time, now it’s become best friend. The youth she had to leave behind, has been restored again. Her faith though kept; still shaken, grew higher than the storm. The nights that had been taken, now feel so safe and warm. A life of bitter ashes, replaced by dreams of dare, the sorrow of the past has, vanished into air. From believing no one loved her, to convinced that Some One does. From accepting she must suffer, to receiving special love. From cringing in a cold cage, to soaring high and free. From leading lady, on a stage, to protesting out of key. The mask,hiding the glow, fell to the ground. Revelation knowledge flows, peace can make a sound. This change came slowly, and remains a mystery. He; forever Holy, searching for..just…me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/7/2011 12:47:00 PM
A really really good write, interesting story, nice rhyme and nice use of meter too! You do have quite a few grammatic errors, line 6 [in two]line 9 [a memories] You are write in 4 line rhyme groupings. It would be easier to read with a space every 4 lines. Light & love
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