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This poem sure hits home with me; To write, it took some time. It proves again as you can see, That the best ones always rhyme. Gene Lakin, My Next Door Neighbor Like a good beer, it hit the spot Outside when it had been hot In my mind together things are meshing And write this poem which is refreshing. Jim Horn My Response to Gene

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Date: 10/13/2014 9:41:00 PM
Bahaha, did someone drink a couple beer or what Happened. I love it lol so here's a 7 for fun.
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Date: 10/14/2014 8:32:00 AM
We did have an afternoon beer. Of course, this was a practical joke with a purpose in mind which was to encourage Gene to Join Poetry Soup. This has to be under 400 characters. Jim Horn
Date: 10/13/2014 6:46:00 PM
This is the worse poem I ever read in my whole life so I only gave it a one out 7 being the best. Jim Horn
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Date: 10/13/2014 6:48:00 PM
Wonder what Gene thinks about that. Jim Horn

Book: Shattered Sighs