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And under the moonlight , your eyes shone in mirth. I could decipher an impish twinkle in your coffee-brown eyes. You hauled myself ; put your arms around my waist. Forming locks with my miasma dark hair which brandished on my shoulders , you whispered those three words which nearly changed the meaning of my life. They were not the typical I LOVE YOU. It was something unusual , ***** . I could sense the veto your voice as when you uttered these words : I feared the worse. Amidst the aches and the pains , the night and the day , heaven and abyss Those words dwelled into my being like the wicked salt in the sea ; there , where it all began...

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Date: 1/5/2016 12:41:00 AM
:) SKAT
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Date: 7/21/2013 5:32:00 PM
Now I'm curious as to what those three words were, but of course that adds to the overall effect of the poem...The last verse is exquisite...Congratulations, Farheen - Tim
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Date: 7/21/2013 3:24:00 AM
congrats on win Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/20/2013 12:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Farheen xx
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Farheen Utim
Date: 7/20/2013 11:51:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/19/2013 9:05:00 PM
Hi Farheen, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT
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Farheen Utim
Date: 7/20/2013 11:51:00 PM
Hello. Thanks <3
Date: 7/19/2013 8:24:00 PM
FARHEEN, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA :-)
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Farheen Utim
Date: 7/20/2013 11:52:00 PM
Thank you!! :)
Date: 6/23/2013 10:13:00 PM
Hi Farheen, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Farheen Utim
Date: 7/20/2013 11:53:00 PM
Aww thank you for all!! *hug back* Yeah.Sure <3
Date: 6/22/2013 12:17:00 PM
a very deep poem... a rough way... love the epic imagery... LINDA
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Farheen Utim
Date: 7/20/2013 11:54:00 PM
ty ^^
Date: 6/22/2013 12:16:00 PM
Farheen, "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far.. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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