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She would fold, refold then fold again And from the paper arose a swan I was always amazed at what she did A creation of beauty from paper She would fold, refold then fold again And from her heart arose a song A creation of beauty from hope and faith And like the swan she helped me fly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/10/2011 6:13:00 AM
A pretty piece, drawing parallels between two type of creation linked by similar emotional resonses, seems somehow incomplete.
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