Origami

Folds of paper edges in shape delicate tales of intricate drape thousand beautiful Origami cranes holding hearts in wedlock chains a crescent moon, no lines or creases crumpled papers ...in bits and pieces

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Tom Woody

Date: 8/22/2023 5:06:00 PM

My wife is Korean and does a bit of origami. Pretty poem Deb

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/20/2023 1:50:00 AM

Ahh, the rhymes are stunningly woven, giving such a mellifluous flow to this piece.. I love how you've incorporated the whole concept of origami and painted it with a tapestry of emotions.. "Holding hearts in wedlock chains" Beautiful!

Debjani Mitra
Date: 8/20/2023 2:05:00 AM

Thanks for the appreciation. I read that in Japanese weddings it is believed that origami Cranes fulfill the wishes of the couple