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Oriel Into 2

Enhanced mood enriching Solace Solace renewing mind and being..' Being, transforming; sense of all. All encompassing light receiving Receiving to give more in strength Strength reaching upwards as columns Columns support shelter above Above is great Intelligence...' Intelligence awaiting a seeking..' Seeking your soul, solar shows.. Shows form, throws shadows around Around follows all, each solar year..' ©Joe Maverick 6-6-2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2015 12:41:00 PM

thanks for seeing my recent post, Joe. It looks like I am all caught up on reading your recent poems!! I answered your soupmail!!

Daver Austin

Date: 7/24/2015 2:41:00 PM

What I said the first time - windows into soul. The getting receptive. "All encompassing light receiving" Love, daver

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/24/2015 5:30:00 AM

Joe you make this look so easy ;) Absolutely love it.. How are you doing?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/12/2015 6:40:00 PM

You have skills my friend! Great use of the form.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/6/2015 9:26:00 PM

I like this poem - it has depth and intelligence. What is Oriel - a constellation? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/26/2015 6:07:00 PM

What a fabulous. Write, excellent.............A.M.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2015 8:11:00 AM

Creative work..Way to go, Joe..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 4:06:00 PM

I see you enjoyed the form Nette showed us in one of her challenges. I like where you took this and I see the other one there in the middle of this set.

Joe Maverick
Date: 6/15/2015 5:25:00 PM

The other one was which I entered into Nettes contest, if you read the inspiration note above it Andrea, I am sure it was the 1st one anyway..'

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2015 3:27:00 PM

Joe, you have penned many great words and phrases within this write and thanks for visiting my poem, no headstone

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/14/2015 8:58:00 AM

tweets away

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2015 8:40:00 AM

Love both of these Joe, ever so different, which makes it all the more unique.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/13/2015 6:52:00 AM

Ok, no wine, and a greater appreciation. I like how this piece circles back around on itself. I like how the words follow on from themselves. The message makes me yearn for learning. Great work. Why haven't you tweeted the link??? I will quite happily if you approve.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/12/2015 11:32:00 AM

I get the shadow searching. This one goes inside and needs a bit of imagination to see the light. Be happy in your light, old Joe. Love, daver

Peter Lewis Holmes

Date: 6/12/2015 3:41:00 AM

Captivating write Joe....Oriel Into 3?....and thanks for the comment...Peter

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2015 8:57:00 PM

Wow Joe, this deserves to be recognized as POTD! I am putting it into my Fav's. It is just OUTSTANDING writing! Cheers, Connie 7

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/10/2015 3:07:00 AM

This is extremely interesting and enjoyable Bravo I really enjoyed the read and thanks for shared.......A.M.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/9/2015 7:14:00 AM

I might have drunk too much wine for this one?

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 6/8/2015 3:54:00 PM

Very well constructed and rendered... I love the phrasing you employ and the imagery it creates. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith