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if it don't stand to attention, i just thought i'd mention, i slap it in the furrow to plow, keep on a plowing, allowing intention, just as long as it works anyhow, things perhaps get hard, snug cuddle bug card, disturrbed and is a rising, just keep playing the game, it aint quite insane the end result is surprising. :re THE VANISHING ORGAN delysia hendricks Don

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Date: 8/21/2012 3:10:00 PM
Hahaha. Good one, Don. I'm chuffed you'd written this gem in response to my poem. Kudos, you wordsmythe, you!!
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Date: 8/21/2012 8:37:00 AM
Interesting little write my friend! I rather enjoyed the creativity you exuded within this incredible poem Don! My favorite line in this write has to be, "snug cuddle bug card" that line says a lot within your poem! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/21/2012 6:11:00 AM
Don this reminds me of that old army saying 'if it moves salute it, if it doesn't then paint it' I like ...Dave
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