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Organdy Fog

The golden sun at first hidden By fog's silver organdy. As clouds rise slowly in the east A warm spring do foresee The fog's silver shawl floats lightly Coating hill, dale, and green Its coat a damp cool wrap chilling Even the birds that sing A Dove's chilly coo, a Sparrow's Damp reply, warms the morn While the sun rises much higher Its yellow sky adorns

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Red Omara

Date: 5/23/2013 6:57:00 AM

Lovely picture beautifully shared, Sara. Almost inspired me to start rising earlier.- Red

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/21/2013 6:43:00 AM

Stunning Sara :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 PM

Such beautiful lines about dawn...my favorite time of day and I felt I was there in your wonderful description. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2013 3:08:00 PM

wow, splendid imagery in this one. Love that middle stanza!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/20/2013 11:57:00 AM

such a warm, soft feel to this one, sara... this thrills me no end for its sensory appeal.. great stuff as always!..:) huggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/20/2013 8:36:00 AM

I thought this poem was one of your best ones, but I am partial towards the fog,...I just love the fog! And you write about it so exquisitely! Oh, by the way, the second line of this poem, "By fog's silver organdy" has 7 syllables instead of the 6 that is desired...maybe you could change it to, "By fog's grey organdy" just an idea Sara! You have presented a completely wondrous write! What an outstanding piece my friend! Great Work!!