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Organdy Fog

The golden sun at first hidden
By fog's silver organdy.
As clouds rise slowly in the east
A warm spring do foresee 

The fog's silver shawl floats lightly
Coating hill, dale, and green
Its coat a damp cool wrap chilling
Even the birds that sing

A Dove's chilly coo, a Sparrow's 
Damp reply, warms the morn
While the sun rises much higher
Its yellow sky adorns 

Copyright © Sara Kendrick

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  1. Date: 5/23/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Lovely picture beautifully shared, Sara. Almost inspired me to start rising earlier.- Red

  1. Date: 5/21/2013 6:43:00 AM
    Stunning Sara :)

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Such beautiful lines about favorite time of day and I felt I was there in your wonderful description. SuZ

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Noting but beauty and I love the way it is exposed to us, I enjoy your charming writes, always xxx

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 3:08:00 PM
    wow, splendid imagery in this one. Love that middle stanza!

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:57:00 AM
    such a warm, soft feel to this one, sara... this thrills me no end for its sensory appeal.. great stuff as always!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
    I thought this poem was one of your best ones, but I am partial towards the fog,...I just love the fog! And you write about it so exquisitely! Oh, by the way, the second line of this poem, "By fog's silver organdy" has 7 syllables instead of the 6 that is desired...maybe you could change it to, "By fog's grey organdy" just an idea Sara! You have presented a completely wondrous write! What an outstanding piece my friend! Great Work!!