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In life and nature orange is all around us, just ordinary orange, orange cats, nothing special, orange leaves we kick out of the way; marigold flowers and we just walk by, ordinary things in life, tiger lily's grow on the side of the road, perhaps we think them weeds. an apricot, honey sunset, do we stop to gaze, or rush away, just ordinary orange things in our world, a tangerine fish in the sea; swimming in the filigree coral, a marmalade coloured bird singing, I used to think of myself as ordinary, ordinary could have been my name. of no special quality or interest, unexceptional, plain, inferior, just an ordinary orange girl, but then suddenly like an orange flower; blooming under the orange tinted sun, I blossomed, and became, exceptional and beautiful, and like the orange cat, I do not need to be told. I just know that I am beautiful inside, my spirit is a marigold glow, so ordinary orange is quite beautiful, if you bother to stop and behold. _____________________ March 4, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Ordinary Orange Copyright Protected, ID 16-764-110-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, United Colours: Orange sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:52:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/15/2016 9:01:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats ~
Date: 3/8/2016 11:08:00 AM
Beautiful write, BW, but I've always thought of you as a more zesty tangerine.
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:05:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the zesty tangerine...
Date: 3/7/2016 5:28:00 PM
Fantastic orange has been sliced and the aroma lingers upon the winners’ page..Congrats on your outstanding work..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 8:16:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the congrats and the outstanding !
Date: 3/6/2016 8:07:00 PM
Hi Constance, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. You are a star in a midnight sky shining bright and eternal. I did enjoy this Orange write. It is not as ordinary as you would think, a seven from me....Vlad.
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:13:00 PM
Vlad, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and for the nice compliments, you are the best !
Date: 3/6/2016 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Constance.
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:59:00 PM
Nayda, thanks for visiting with congratulations !
Date: 3/6/2016 4:58:00 PM
Constance , a big congratulations, and I look forward to hearing from you in email soon.
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:04:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and an email is coming, promise !
Date: 3/6/2016 3:04:00 PM
Yes, far from ordinary it is and yes far from that are you. Like a beautiful item in the list you are if we happen to stop by to enjoy it. How lucky for us (me) to behold your essence in these words. Sheer magic how you do this so seemingly without effort and so majestically. It is the work of something not ordinary at all--so humble and pure in expression but basic truth.
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:26:00 PM
Duke, thanks for visiting with that beautiful comment and compliments, so appreciated !
Date: 3/6/2016 10:16:00 AM
BW, beautiful imagery and use of the color orange...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:43:00 PM
Laura, thanks so much for the nice comment and congrats !
Date: 3/6/2016 9:08:00 AM
- B.W., congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 6:49:00 PM
Anne Lise, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !
Date: 3/6/2016 7:51:00 AM
I love the direction you went with this piece. You my dear are far from Ordinary!
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:02:00 PM
Richard, thank you so much for the compliment !
Date: 3/4/2016 10:59:00 PM
wonderfully done. So much nicer to orange than mine is. I really do not like this color but you pointed out all the beautiful things in that color!!
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Date: 3/4/2016 11:15:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the compliment, so appreciated, only nature can make orange beautiful !
Date: 3/4/2016 9:46:00 PM
I read and I look into the cat's eyes...and I read and look into the cat's eyes and "she" says "yep, I'm orange, but I'm far from ordinary!!!" You Broken Wings...You!!! :-)
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Date: 3/4/2016 11:26:00 PM
Walter, thanks for the great comment, there is nothing ordinary about that beautiful cat, although there are a gazillion orange cats in the world !
Date: 3/4/2016 4:11:00 PM
This is far from ordinary Constance - delightful vibrant imagery good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:31:00 PM
Jan, thank you for that lovely comment, and compliment, so appreciated !
Date: 3/4/2016 4:02:00 PM
Ahh!! Glad to know that you are beautiful Spirit..I thought that you might be..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/4/2016 4:34:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the lovely comment, appreciate !

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