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Orchestral Sighs

On our bed she lies Half naked to bare, sound asleep Tanned curves allure me Eyes closed, visions of last night Sheets gripped tight, orchestral sighs .

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Carol Eastman

Date: 10/31/2014 9:34:00 AM

Great imagery and flow... Really accents your thoughts. Shows every thing off to it's best advantage. Well done!

James Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 4:24:00 PM

Thank you kindly Carol, your comments are always appreciated, James :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/24/2014 1:39:00 PM

really love how you drew this excellent pen dear friend

James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 3:22:00 PM

Thank you kindly Liam, very much appreciated, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/24/2014 1:31:00 AM

orchestral sighs what a phrase..:) it connotes various images but with this one.... mmmn and it's sensuous.. :)..... olive eloisa.. wink ;)

James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 12:39:00 PM

Mixing words that one may not think apt, sometimes shows adapt. It's the daring of the writer for he/she knows what they are thinking. It's up to the reader to delve into their thinking depths to decipher what the writer is thinking. Sometimes I'm read, then again, sometimes I'm unsaid - James.......

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2014 2:40:00 PM

James this is such a sensual tanka:-) hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2014 3:58:00 PM

Aww James you are such a sweetheart to say that - you have made my day:-) Hugs Jan xxx

James Fraser
Date: 10/23/2014 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Jan, and for all your visits to my poetry. You keep me here, James :) xxxx