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Orchestra of Waves

Evening tide crashes, Sun sets into the ocean: Symphonic surges.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2009 3:55:00 AM

Beautiful. Exceptional use of words. Love the feelings and sounds your words bring to this Haiku Raul. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 9/17/2009 2:44:00 AM

Beautiful,..just beautiful Raul ! Great Haiku Sir ! james

Abe Lopez

Date: 9/16/2009 8:18:00 PM

the crashing waves make a beautiful sound that is heard through this write, very nice Raul!

Date: 9/16/2009 2:31:00 PM

I like your use of sight and sound images in this poem. The title fits well with the poem. Much captured in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Joshua Lacey

Date: 9/16/2009 2:30:00 PM

sure is a peaceful thing to behold

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 9/16/2009 1:09:00 PM

Beautifully penned. pl insert bright..sun set in the bright ocean, 5/7/5. More haiku pls.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 1:00:00 PM

This is much like the sounds and sights one hears on Florida's Gulf coast, Raul. Truly a delightful "Orchestra of Waves." Is your book out yet? Love, Carolyn