Orange Sea

Swells of auburn hills, Osculate the cobalt sky; Romance of the Fall.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2010 7:34:00 AM

Good one..So descriptive that it is almost like being there..Sara

Misty Penton-Leccese

Date: 12/14/2010 1:32:00 PM

What a beautiful image that you have put into the minds of your reads Raul. I can just imagine the hills and the sky. Lots of Love, ~Misty Leccese~

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/21/2010 9:46:00 PM

Hi Raul. I nice love story between sky and Earth in Fall. Happy Holidays, Raul!

Justin Hensley

Date: 11/20/2010 3:12:00 PM

Man Raul, you make me miss home. this poem very much reminds me of the fall during sun rise and sun set off this hills in teh valley where i lived during school. Very beautiful the title is so Strong i love it.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/18/2010 8:42:00 PM

Dear Sensei Raul, I saw YOU were online so I'm here to say Superb Haiku as usual Hope this finds YOU and YOURS in Great Health and High Spirits How are YOU my Brother POET I am a Premium Member now Have YOU read any of my 5 blogs I sponsored a contest probably my only one I'm not a good Judge I think they are all Winners Good to see YOU again Keep in Touch LOVE ALWAYS...Harry (HG)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2010 4:19:00 PM

Tender picture u painted in creative words Raul.. lovely Fall Romance indeed ..the best kind.. hope u are doing well ..be blessed on this happy day with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2010 1:10:00 PM

With what wonderful images you have penned Romance of the Fall, raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2010 5:29:00 AM

A great image of autumn, Raul. Nice to see you postiing again. Love and blessings for the holidays, Carolyn