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Orange Roses

Orange roses A lonesome starlet And a lusty lover-moon Scarlet thoughts of tides Of deep passion and romance I dream of orange roses. Roses fresh and rare Covering you all over And I flick them one By one to find my love bites Wherever the roses were. 10 apr 2013, Form: Tanka S.Jagathsimhan Nair For Skat's contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:27:00 PM

Hi Jag, congrats on your win. stopping by to say good night. LOVE *LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2013 10:10:00 PM

JAG, Congratulations, with your awesome winning poem. ;-) Enjoy my latest blog if you like. Always loving and enjoying the soup ~ SKAT ~

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 2:38:00 PM

Excellent! Congrats on your win. AO

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/28/2013 8:58:00 PM

Jag. Congratulations, with your awesome poem. Goodnight~LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/12/2013 1:02:00 AM

Nice very romantic Jag xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2013 6:39:00 AM

wow, you did a great job with the orange rose. one of the best in the contest.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/10/2013 5:14:00 PM

Rare is the orange rose.......and rare is such a romantic and beautiful poem to describe! Nicely done!!

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/10/2013 5:09:00 PM

exquisite jaggy, romantic poems such as this are a forte of yours (even if you don't think so!) I have yet to post mine, I chose the orange roses too...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2013 10:32:00 AM

- Thanks for your really lovely poem Jag. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 10:02:00 AM

a very passionate and beautiful write, very much enjoyed reading this one...p.d.