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Orange In My Pocket

When I arrived I brought with me an orange in my pocket it warmed me nearly, as my girl her picture in my locket providing me security like Linus and his blanket it cleansed me of my awkwardness its scent wafted about helping me to feel at peace once I took it out its orange glow provided strength in a chilly world just like the warmth I felt back home with my girl it transformed my imagining dead trees came to life the fruit it bared that I held dear I gave it to my wife a chance to strive our drama free from strife red is fine, yellow too it's better when they meet blending in a fruitful whirl my girl is orange sweet

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Date: 5/14/2016 7:04:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Brian.
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Date: 5/13/2016 8:26:00 AM
Brian, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/13/2016 12:50:00 AM
Hi Brian,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/12/2016 2:01:00 PM
- Hi Brian :) - Thanks for your first great poems :) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - .... Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 1:15:00 PM
Brian,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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