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Orange Cat

Just an ol' Tom Cat dirty orange in color, Rummaging like a rat through filth and squalor Painfully moving with an obvious limp and a single eye from which to glimpse. Orange cat advanced with a hesitant skimp; so sorrowful a cat I haven't seen since. Confused and frightened I could sense his pain. Sorrowful and disheartened He began to fain. Without value or worth, abandoned and alone, he searched from birth trying to find a home. Such a dreadful place to see suffering like that, in the trash and waste where I found orange cat. He struggled with broken limb and to not ease his strain would have been a sin for anyone who could help him. Giving him worth and value I cuddled him in my lap, providing affection anew, he loved me for that. After a hard fought struggle he died that night. In the warmth of a cuddle he ended his plight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/1/2009 9:06:00 AM
Thank you all for your kind comments and especially thank you Constance for your selection.
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Date: 10/1/2009 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest Ed. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:09:00 AM
Ed, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:01:00 PM
Ed, what a fitting winner in Constance's contest!...congrats!... jim
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Date: 9/30/2009 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win, in my contest, All Pets Go to Heaven, and thank you for sharing this memory with us.
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Date: 9/21/2009 1:00:00 PM
Hi Ed Ah, a beautiful loving truibute to "Orange Cat". Sorry for his pain but glad he had you to comfort him in his time of need. Bless your heart...Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/21/2009 10:06:00 AM
Outstanding write Ed. You made the little fellow feel loved and at peace. Thank you for your kind words Ed. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:54:00 AM
Wow, love the analogy here. Excellent write. Thank you for writing and thank you for your comment.
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