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Orange Ball

Sweltering heat exhausting So very hot am I Unable to breathe In this searing heat From that big Orange ball in the sky Folk sit in the sun day after day fill me with horror fill with dismay Burning their skin whilst getting a tan Burning instead to a deep shiny red At home They cannot sleep skin is damaged by searing heat With sun stroke and sunburn off work for a week If only they realized sat on the beach It is radioactivity burning their skin And if they continue Melanomas begin as cancer slowly creeps in Never knowing it can kill Is it worth it for the thrill... Enjoy this summer’s day But stay out of sun midday To keep sunburn at bay Apply sun screen factor fifty Keeps you young and fit and nifty For at last summer has come Now go out and have some fun … Written 21st JULY 2022 after extremely high temperatures Contest BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CONTEST Sponsor Brian Strand

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Date: 8/2/2022 3:33:00 PM
Great pen Ann, giving out some real healthy advice and as you say I don't understand people who just live for lying in the sun. Why people save up all year to go to some sun drenched place in Europe just to sit for a fortnight in the sun all day. It doesn't make sense to me. Have a cool day, Gordon x
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 8/3/2022 1:09:00 PM
Hello dear Gordon, yes I feel exactly the same, always so much fun to explore the country you happen to be in... thank you for visiting as I always appreciate your kind comments With love and hugs Ann xx
Date: 7/24/2022 3:13:00 PM
Your "Orange Ball" was a creative write. The sun is good/fun but sure can hurt us with a bad burn. I have done that a few times and it is no fun. Have a wonderful/blessed day.....................
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 7/25/2022 12:07:00 PM
Many thanks dear Paula for your great comments. Yes in the past I have been very burnt, as when I was a child no one really worried about putting cream on and because I had red hair and freckles I had some nasty burns. which resulted in two malignant melanomas a few years ago, luckily caught before they had spread... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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