Orange

bitter sweet was its taste juices that flowed freely refreshing the throat

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2014 4:28:00 PM

Enjoyable haiku. I've got 3 types of oranges in my garden, but I leave the sweet ones to the rest of the family....I go after the bitter ones. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/5/2014 5:24:00 PM

I love oranges, they are very refreshing and vibrant. Orange is also one of my favorite colors. This is a unique poem, and a nice one from you, Shadow!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/6/2014 7:32:00 AM

ty Kelly hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/5/2014 9:13:00 AM

I like orange juice but hate marmalade.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/5/2014 9:33:00 AM

I like both ty Rick hugs salt works well sprinkled on peeled oranges counteracts the sharp bitterness hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2014 1:08:00 AM

refreshing. YES it is!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/5/2014 3:44:00 AM

simple poem Andrea cool long drink of freshly squeezed oranges yum hugs

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:27:00 PM

Hi there Shadow, I haven't been around as much so tonight decided to read some poems. Orange you glad I read this one? :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/5/2014 3:43:00 AM

i hope you enjoyed it Arthur always nice to see you visit hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2014 7:59:00 PM

HA, Shadow, I find your poem very attractive... A sweet taste, not many will like.... I'm smiling, because just today. I had a change of favorite colors. I love green, but now when someone wants to know what my favorite color... I'm answering.. ORANGE""" xox~ Linda

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/5/2014 3:41:00 AM

I love the hot colours yellow is my fav followed by orange glad you enjoyed hugs