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Orange

You laid low,          and I watched, You smoked a cigarette,          and we talked You asked me if i wanted to go with you,           And i said 'yes'  We new it was all through           As we fell             Down, down deeper            we lost ourselves  No one else            could even touch Wrapped up, intertwined            We were hidden Through our eyes, confessions               That was given We talked often, no worries            No end in sight held hands, made love             So into you Until something went wrong,            Silence came, Air goes out; he goes in                       Ceiling fell down I remember you'd drive          Drive anywhere for me We'd go happy together          Linked arms, held hands But now it's different.          Out of our dream. Forget about what was,          And what is...

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Date: 12/21/2012 10:44:00 PM
orange, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD
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Date: 2/18/2012 3:47:00 PM
really emotional. very good use of words and language. this is the type of sad romance that'd make anyone feel sad. keep writing!!! :)
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Jen Reagh
Date: 2/19/2012 4:47:00 PM
Thanks L : ) It's a very intense time in my life hahaha Read some of yours, and really forward to reading more!

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