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Below is the poem entitled Orange which was written by poet Jen Reagh. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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You laid low,
         and I watched,
You smoked a cigarette,
         and we talked
You asked me if i wanted to go with you,
          And i said 'yes' 
We new it was all through
          As we fell            

Down, down deeper 
          we lost ourselves 
No one else 
          could even touch
Wrapped up, intertwined
           We were hidden
Through our eyes, confessions 
             That was given

We talked often, no worries
           No end in sight
held hands, made love
            So into you
Until something went wrong,
           Silence came,
Air goes out; he goes in           
           Ceiling fell down

I remember you'd drive
         Drive anywhere for me
We'd go happy together
         Linked arms, held hands
But now it's different. 
        Out of our dream.
Forget about what was,
         And what is...               

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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:44:00 PM
    orange, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 2/18/2012 3:47:00 PM
    really emotional. very good use of words and language. this is the type of sad romance that'd make anyone feel sad. keep writing!!! :)

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    Date: 2/19/2012 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks L : ) It's a very intense time in my life hahaha Read some of yours, and really forward to reading more!