Optimistic Orange For Contest

Orange Tulips bouquet And the peaches cream cake Given as a surprise bestow Under the flame colored flower tree Where the monarch butterflies fly As a symbol of two Souls that begin To love 3-5-2016 Syllables Per Line: 2 4 6 8 10 8 6 4 2 Total # Syllables: 50 Total # Lines: 9 Total # Words: 34 Third Place United Colours Orange Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:43:00 PM

Nayda, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/15/2016 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2016 10:25:00 AM

Creative way to go with the orange theme..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/7/2016 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Sara

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/6/2016 10:31:00 PM

Picturesque and optimistic..Congratulations....

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/7/2016 4:40:00 AM

Thank you Probir

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2016 7:11:00 PM

Hi Nayda, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2016 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Vladislav

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/6/2016 6:01:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this unique form, Nayda :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2016 7:56:00 PM

Thank you Laura

Rob Carmack

Date: 3/6/2016 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nayda.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2016 1:55:00 PM

Thank you Rob

Lu Loo

Date: 3/6/2016 10:04:00 AM

Nayda, I love this form, I have never seen it before, I have said it before but you are the best at these types of forms using strict syllable count and meter, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/6/2016 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Laura