Opposites

I who am stubborn stir moodiness in with pride to snap out hurtful retorts love and forgiveness, tolerates imperfection and remains married to me

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/25/2012 12:55:00 PM

Al. Congrats on your poem being featured. A delight to read of a man who has the courage to be honest and honor his wife's tollerance. Shades of my spouse are seen and why l enjoyed it so. Mahalo

Daver Austin

Date: 10/24/2012 2:43:00 PM

Opposites attract, eh? Like it. Congrats on the selection. daver

Rayshawn Fisher

Date: 10/23/2012 4:08:00 AM

Very nice and well written :)

Holly Moore

Date: 9/30/2012 3:08:00 AM

She must really love you...We all have our imperfections, and I'm sure she has hers. The most important thing is in the end to forgive, kiss goodnight, and in the morning begin again...Holly Moore

Al Beech
Date: 9/30/2012 9:25:00 AM

She puts up with a lot, thanks.