Opportunistic Omnivore

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adopting the Israeli variation on the haiku

I’m an opportunistic omnivore The game’s been called survival I eats what food I find

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Date: 12/16/2019 7:31:00 PM

I like how your twist of humor spices up the not so funny reality this poem exposes. Well penned, George.

George Schaefer
Date: 8/29/2021 2:58:00 PM

If I wasn't laughing, I'd be crying. thanks for reading

Date: 12/10/2019 9:29:00 PM

In Survival game you dont have much options..Nice one..

George Schaefer
Date: 8/29/2021 2:57:00 PM

true enough. thank you for reading and commenting

Date: 12/10/2019 7:52:00 PM

Nicely pennd my friend. Thanks for sharing this George

George Schaefer
Date: 8/29/2021 2:57:00 PM

thank you kindly