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Operation Went Wrong

Operation gone wrong .................................. Last words I heard Close your eyes, just sleep I obeyed, I closed them tight I heard the Dr. say, She’s out like a light But I wasn’t, I could hear everything I heard the slicing of my skin, Humor about the scalpel so thin I heard all but felt nothing I tried to shout, I HEAR YOU-ALL! Nothing came out nothing at all Small talk a few jokes One about 3 days without a smoke I’m here, I’m here, I’m not asleep Dr. I know you sliced me deep Could this be happening While the Dr.s practicing I need to get up, I need to get out Out of here, away from all Code blue, code blue, I hear them call Wait, I see, I see them all I hear, I see, how can this be pressing down upon my chest 1, 2, 3 Their trying to save me But I’m ok, I feel just fine No pain no longer in my spine She’s gone, I hear, I hear them say No, I’m thinking I’m here to stay They cover my face I turned so blue Must tell her loved one’s, the dr said The correct time I pronounce her dead Where do I go? what happens now? Into the light a whisper said softly Your pain now gone, your where you belong Be Thankful your operation went wrong

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Date: 6/27/2019 5:24:00 PM
absolutely beautiful, strange that i HAVE NEVER HAD AN OPERATION BEFORE BUT I HAVE FELT LIKE THIS MANY TIMES,this poem reminds me of all the unfortunate times in life where I had left paralyzed by the comments and the words of those around me.....I absolutely loved this poem, and I hope ou continue bleeding (writing) and may you, through your bleeding find a way to heal. much love xoxoxo
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