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my vision of this tainted world never learning becoming stupid as they never learned love and peace 

Another war crime to add onto a bucket list that goes on far beyond our mind Another human rights violation unheard of when is this world going to awaken The sleeping giant filled with grace and bring those murdering monsters to trial So as they may face justice their justice returned onto them So many masks fall away in a world arena Greed and pride invades countries Forcing poor innocence to suffer trying to bring order with chaos and control Desecration of the holy lands innocent blood spills on sands of our times Each and everyone of us knows morally right There is a worth in every death The moons have bled I see it now opening behind scenes Pray God be merciful unto the blind hiding open their eyes for a moment In a just democracy power is the people understand this ninety per cent of all killed Innocent people says it all sealed In the name of the cross and ark of our covenant They who love in God's name will speak Holy Spirit holds the castle fort commands you They who live on the dark side reek peace for them does not exist Killing machines show no mercy on suffering souls Thou shalt not kill love's reminder enemy hates Love thy neighbor spoken on the tablets They have no morals standing within the light of truth Spawn's of the Devil out of hell kills with burning lead so we see behind the mask who deceives us They who worship the golden calf again as they do the anti-Christ's bidding Reeking havoc upon this earth plundering their soul aim is destruction givers Treating people like animals clowned joke reeks of vermin crawling underneath their skin Angels upon this earth our battles has begun we all can see the ignorance killing is not just With twisted visions planning forward with no democracy to kneel playing the key role fate our destiny awaits us all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/1/2015 12:40:00 PM
- Truth one has seen with his own eyes and formulated by your own thought, Liam - The only true law is that which leads to freedom, a excellent poem !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:56:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Just got to your piece this Sunday afternoon. From our phone conversation on Saturday, I do see what you mean regarding your write here and the recent one I did on "A Progressive Shadow." Your magnificent couplet here is the perfect metaphorical and image complement to "A Progressive Shadow." Methinks Mate you hit the target solid on, with this most timely, spot-on poem. Outstanding Work as always!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:50:00 AM
Hi Liam: A sad commentary on the horrors confronting all the innocents. As someone who has been to many middle east countries(years ago) nothing has changed. It's not religion but power including a dictator who was a dentist. Great Write!
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Date: 10/31/2015 11:15:00 AM
Hi Liam! Wow!A most powerful,outstanding poem,you've written here my dearest friend,Liam.Very sad but very beautifully written with a lot of truth and deep caring, understanding and compassion.Yes, it's so very sad and horrible whats taking place all over our world these days, and for so long.So many very sad and horrible situations, n' terrible injustices against mankind, just very deplorable,tragic things, and it really saddens my heart and soul so very much.I know that you have a very beautiful heart n soul Liam, a heart of pure gold and that you deeply care.So sweet of you!God bless you more for it.Thank you so much for caring, n' writing this very beautiful and excellent piece here,Liam.A true glowing golden gem!Superb!Great poem!Just awesome!I love it.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 10/31/2015 10:40:00 AM
excellent pen Liam -your poem sure is an eye opener to the atrocities in our world:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/31/2015 8:30:00 AM
When there is no democracy there is no freedom,and when there is no freedom there is no peace.May eyes be truely opened..Excellent Liam
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