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Open Your Eyes

Why that I turn you murmur Why plot against the innocent Truly, the one you love Is the one to destroy you Coz death always smile at you They're dear to your heart They look feint and smile with you Showing snowy, cruel kindness teeth When you cry They shed crocodile tears with you But in heart rejoicing in your misery Still asleep, open your eyes Coz you're better off Such two timing perfidious hypocrites Who defames you Not all around you are on your side Remember, you're on your own

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Date: 10/13/2014 6:16:00 PM
Yes, that sadly happens my dear friend. Many rejoice in the misery of others and hold no honesty and kindness for their fellow man in their cold hearts. That's the world and many dishonest people for you. Well stated! Enjoyed the read.;) Hugs! Love and light! Take good care now. xxxx D.
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Victor Satekge
Date: 10/16/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thank you for the comments Dorian, really appreciate it. Kindly regards.
Date: 10/13/2014 5:29:00 PM
Yes we are on our own. It is a sad existence. Words we truly understand when we are grown. When our life can fade in an instance. Good work
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Victor Satekge
Date: 10/16/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thank you for the comments Mark, was away for few days. Kindly regards.

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