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Open Your Eyes

pushed aside left alone nobody sees open your eyes they just move along unknowing, oblivious open your eyes and you will see the pain it rips pulls inside me throbbing heavy it is too much they don't know! pay attention just open and look someone has to see this why don't i tell they push away harder they reject they disagree the pain gets stronger i suffer in silence my fault i wish i didn't need them their eyes never open they don't wish to see me just keep away safer it seems don't let them touch me run away get away you have something better eventually you will learn it might be too late to open your eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/10/2010 11:35:00 AM
Ra R, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Ra R. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:38:00 AM
:)
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Date: 12/4/2009 12:47:00 AM
Many people are so blind to the silent screams right in front of their face. I really enjoyed this I can relate easily.
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Date: 12/3/2009 9:32:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ra. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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