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Open Your Eyes

Part not ever from your dreams for it's not as far as it seems Think not ever that it's too far away for at this very moment it's floating your way Just open your eyes it can be true the time is here but it's up to you For many have dreamt but were always asleep they could not see what was there to reap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/23/2009 8:42:00 AM
Wonderfull advice. Too many look but never see or search the world never knowing that the answers were in our own back yard. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:02:00 AM
inspiring write.
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:13:00 PM
great message! light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2009 2:45:00 PM
Elegantly stated Maryam! Where would we be without our dreams? Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/11/2009 8:41:00 PM
I love this. great message=don't let your dreams pass you by, open your eyes
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Date: 4/11/2009 10:33:00 AM
Nice job ^^
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Date: 4/10/2009 2:24:00 PM
Love the title.. story of my life..just open my eyes.. this is done very well my friend...thanks for the comments.
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:41:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Maryam! There is a lot of wisdom in your words and it is a very inspirational poem! One of my favs! Thank you for all your kind words. I have missed everybody and a lot of great poems, like this! Love, Robin
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Date: 4/10/2009 12:58:00 AM
Wise words Maryam.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/9/2009 8:17:00 PM
"Wonderful & Beautiful Message Filled With Sincere Compassion Maryam!!!":):)~Flowing, Inspirational and Oh So True!!!:):)~Smile, "Perfect Words To Reflect Upon For This Weekend!!!":):)~Which, I hope hope will be filled with many wonders and much beauty for "'You & Your Loves,' Always, John!!!"~"Happy Easter Dear Lady!!!":):) ~
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Date: 4/9/2009 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful .. I love it hehe love Em
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Date: 4/9/2009 4:21:00 PM
I like this a lot Maryam this is great lol =) Hugs, Jese
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:49:00 PM
bright! promising! love the attitude! jmg
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:11:00 PM
Yes, we must seize those dreams and make them come true. Very well stated, Maryam!
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