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Open Your Eyes

Open your mouth Myopic eyes will dim as time goes by and promises missed as you watch them fly open your eyes and meander as rain an aimless plight to capture again and recall the desolate times of yore on planning a theme to further your core renew your theme to set up a date good times await you and you must tempt fate garner your thoughts twixt fortune or pain open your eyes and pursue again and update your time to alter your brain improve your mood in an intrepid vein just open your mouth facing north or south, “For a fly does not enter a closed mouth” Romani Proverb Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward September 3, 2019

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Date: 10/13/2019 2:38:00 PM
Interesting twist on your last two lines. Take chance or there will be no reward.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/15/2019 12:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, James!

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