OPEN VERSE 3-4

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THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

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STRATEGY a spatial boundary dismantled from memory tranquil cropped in an encoded facade encroached by eloquent realms of unspoilt semi- abstract crests glistening phenomena patterned representation consonances plays of light in recurring ambivalent composition indifferent intractable invisible dynamic contrasts summed up in the unfamiliar ELOQUENCE a reticent celebration of ambiguity latent licit straightforward yet oblique interpretation beyond the inner image nurtured in connected tendencies to evolve closely obsessive an ambivalent narrative observed in dreamy abandon of unmistakable pleasure initiated in the unconscious made manifest by desire once repressed derived by a sense of intimacy

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