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Open Tunnel

I never will leave you again Hope and prayer in me Never pretend I made my way to you You never turned away You never had to say I saw you I never will leave you again It was hard not knowing Why you left there It was hard knowing I was never scared It was hard between the lines Manuscripting here I'm never gone Heart open again I never will leave you Now I stand Before you turn Here I am standing Engaging in your love Here I am glancing To trust I will never leave you

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Skat A

Date: 2/1/2016 5:47:00 PM

Elisheba, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 11:39:00 PM

Hi Elisheba, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/30/2016 10:29:00 AM

even when we are apart....I need only look inside my heart....because that is where you start....Unified In Love, Mating Souls, Creating Art....Beautiful write lisa....;)

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2016 1:52:00 AM

Lisa,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Goddess Queen Yahudah
Date: 1/30/2016 10:05:00 AM

Thank you Skat! I am a single mother and I love to write. I am inspired by practically anything. As long as there is a reason, subject and or matter; I write. I had writers block for a number of years and now the blockage is gone and the faucet is running! Much more to come and thanks again!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 1:29:00 AM

Hi Lisa, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Goddess Queen Yahudah
Date: 1/30/2016 10:07:00 AM

Thank you very much for the encouraging words! I am ready to have fun lol