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Open the floodgate

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Below is the poem entitled Open the floodgate which was written by poet SHAH JEHAN ASHRAFI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Open the floodgate

Open the floodgate and you will see
You will witness forbidden desires on their spree
Priests will be seen lying drunk in bars
Adolescents will speed up their sport cars
Kids will eat loads of chocolates everyday
Leaving their children mothers will go on holiday
Students will relax on the eve of exams
Computers will not bother to execute programmes
People will dance naked in broad daylight
Worms will fly to reach a new height
Moths will hide their faces in darkness
Bees will distribute honey to all with eagerness
Sweeter will taste the fruits which are forbidden
Open the floodgate and wonders will happen...

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  1. Date: 2/23/2013 12:10:00 PM
    Shah , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)

  1. Date: 2/14/2013 6:53:00 PM
    I enjoyed this poem with all the possibilities...many sound good to me.

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
    i have to disagree people should be free to do what they want like the pattern though davidscott

  1. Date: 2/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Welcome to poetry soup ..and Well.done on your poem..keep posting