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Open Invitation

You treat me like a whore
But no more
I'm actually quite a bore
What do you want me for

You look into my eyes
You ignore all my cries
You give me all these lies
And you wear a disguise

Not today
Just look away
I don't want to play
I'm not a buffet

You drive me mad
You treat me like a fad
You don't care if I'm sad
I'm sure there's more I could add

I'm not a sensation
This isn't a negotiation
Find a new temptation
I'm not an open invitation

*Written on April 29, 2012*

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  1. Date: 4/30/2012 12:27:00 PM
    Great poem here Lily!!

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Touching written poem Lily, but I like it!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 11:31:00 AM
    Smile ˜ Love The Rhyme ˜ Definitely Understand The Emotions, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Lady * Personally, If I Were Seventeen Or Eighteen Or Twent-Three Even Again, Then, I Might Fit This Blind Box ˜ Thankfully I Given A Bit Of Time To Take Hold, The Beauty & Preciousness Of Anothers Heart * My Love to You, John!:) ˜