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Open Field

She stands in the open field, thinking about all her loving friends. Still she stands alone with certain things, understood only by some. Just as the lone bird, perched on the tree branch in the distance. Outsiders who know nothing choose to pass judgement at times. They are wrong as the vehicle that just passed her on the street. It weaved back and forth into the wrong lane, as she swerved to miss it. The field is bright with wisps of yellow blowing in the whistling wind. So fierce the wind can be at times, breaking branches, even in peace. She turned her head to see the lone bird had flown, time for her to go. She left knowing there is nothing more reliable than God and herself. She will return to the field, but may never see that same bird again. Heidi Sands

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Date: 11/9/2016 8:21:00 PM
Lovely introspective viewpoint Heidi. Better to be the lone bird than the caged bird. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Paloma. Yes, that is true. You couldn't be more right on that.
Date: 11/9/2016 7:19:00 PM
Very nice deep write Heidi; especially the part nothing more reliable than God & yourself; how true!:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2016 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl. I appreciate your return to read this and your kind comment.
Date: 11/9/2016 5:16:00 PM
Very deep Heidi and definitely creates thought. And no, she probably won't see that same bird again but there will always be something of beauty to see. really nicely done my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/9/2016 5:23:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I appreciate your visits and kind support with writing. :)

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