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chaotic uprising of humanity milling throngs in their intellectual stupor search endlessly for beans ... and stuff. murky faces masking minds that compete for favors. races crash in harmony of wanton pick-up desires as love ceases to exist. blaring music battles pinball machines to rankle dope shattered nerves. coffee blotches tables and chairs of putrid green. the floor rises up with suffocating scents. open twenty-four hours a day welcoming night souls. The Hot Dog Palace a farcical palace where hot dogs are terrifying and the Man can maintain his scrutiny of creation.

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Date: 11/22/2010 11:45:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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Date: 11/22/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sue. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:55:00 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all today .. may u and yours enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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